Third person post. Write about a memory you have but describe it using the third person. Use as many sensory images (sights, sounds, textures, etc) as you can. Don’t use “I” or “me” unless you include dialogue.
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It was Adrienne's first rainforest. It was so lush and green. She could hardly see three feet in front of her. She was afraid of getting lost. The smell. It smelled like warm, wet dirt. But cleaner, purer. Then the rain started, real soft at first. Kind of misty, then it began to rain harder. Raindrops so big. The noise of the raindrops hitting the leaves of the trees was like a train roaring down the tracks. So loud it was disorienting. The rainforest was a place she could get lost in. A beautiful place you could get lost in. A beautiful place to be treasured.
Until tomorrow...
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Indeed, very beautiful :-)
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